The Monster of Mystery Valley
One day, my older son, Jason, announced that there was one more thing he wanted to do before school started. This was a long time ago. As we left the dock, we felt the cool air coming up from the water. Fishing air feels and smells like no other air. It cools your face and gets in under your shirt, and everything is left behind—all work, all worries, all the static of the city.
“Remember last time?” asked Jason, as he let his line out behind the boat. I did. Here, we had seen the strangest sight: at the very end of the lake, violet hills and green pastures and scattered cattle and a little river running through the willows, a valley that seemed to recede from view as we approached. “The closer we get, the farther away it seems,” I had said to him. His eyes had grown wide. The light had turned red and begun to fade. We had turned back.
“This time, I’d like to go find the mystery valley,” said Jason.
So, just after dawn, we headed straight for the endless arm and the valley at the end. It took a long time to get there. As we approached, Jason said with awe, “It’s like Africa.”
The foothills looked like pink sheets plucked up by invisible fingers, and a stream ran between them and out of another century, meandering slow as Sunday morning through willows and cottonwoods, oozing eventually through a marsh and into the lake. “Look!” said Jason. Ahead, we saw the fields of mustard grass and cattle and two white egrets standing tall, lifting their feet in slow motion, watching the surface of the water.
We moved through the shallows and into the stream. Running the outboard slowly, I slid the boat between drowning bushes. Minnows shot ahead and to each side. The air closed in.
Jason’s job was to watch for stumps and hidden obstructions below the surface. He knelt on the front seat and leaned over.
“Dad, a log…Dad, an…alligator!”
He straightened up, eyes wide. ” I thought it was a log, but then the log moved forward real quick and ate a minnow.” He said the thing was as long as the boat, or almost as long.
Probably a big catfish or carp, I told him. ” Water magnifies. But then again it could be…”
Pause. “…the monster of mystery valley.”
Jason rolled his eyes. Nine-year-olds do a lot of eye-rolling. But I could tell part of him believed in the possibility, and that he was pleased.
I recalled a similar morning on the Lake of the Ozarks. It is one of my earliest memories. I had looked up at the sky as my father and mother had loaded rods and tackle boxes into the boat, and had seen a sun so swollen that it had seemed to fill half the sky. An optical illusion, I’m sure, but to this day, part of my mind still believes that on certain magical days the sun approaches us like an eye at the other end of a microscope.
Jason and I moved forward, got stuck a couple times, poled out with an oar. And far up the stream, where the air grew silent, we banked the boat and got out. I wanted to see what was in the line of trees; perhaps it was a deeper channel. So we headed across a mushy field of high weeds, through drifting clouds of green, newly hatched flies. Our feet sank down now, six inches below the surface, then more…
At the edge of the trees was a shallow pool of muddy water where something moved beneath the surface. As we approached, a phalanx of panicked life charged away from us, churning the water. We waded on, beneath the trees, where the light was coming down in a kind of sunfall through the branches, and then we stood, awestruck in the silence.
As far as we could see was what appeared to be a field of glowing, green snow. We reached down, both of us, and scooped up fistfuls of duckweed, each plant with the delicacy of miniature clover. Both of us, I think, stopped breathing for a moment, and we stood there for a long time looking out across that scene, and finally we let out our breath.
After a while we headed back to the brown pool, and knelt in the water. “Feel around,” I said, moving my hands in the muck below the surface.
“Dad, yuck.”
“Really, do it.” I felt something moving and came up with it in my hand: a squirming, fat bullfrog tadpole.
Jason, excited and proud, caught one, too.
We made our way back to the boat, and Jason climbed in. I took my rod from the boat, and waded along the stream, pulling the boat behind me. I saw a flash of color and a good-sized bass hit my fly just below the surface. And, of course, I hooted and hollered and fell sideways into the stream. Jason pointed. He could see an even bigger fish following the one on my line. A few minutes later, I held the bass in the water and stroked its belly and we watched it slowly swim away.
I made a wish: that when Jason reached my age, he would still believe in the monster of mystery valley, and that he would know that, sometimes, the closer you are to a place, the farther away it can become.
We turned the boat and moved back down the stream. Jason again scouted the shadows in the water, watching for danger until he could no longer see the bottom, and the valley disappeared.
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Richard Louv is chairman of the Children and Nature Network. He is the author of “Last Child in the Woods: Saving Our Children from Nature-Deficit Disorder,” “The Web of Life,” and other books.
Illustration by Dave Mollering
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Rich — Enjoyed Mystery Valley very much. Nice piece!
Best,
Ken
Wonderful, descriptive writing. You pulled me into the mystery. I’m sure your son will remember this day for a long time!
After I have read the monster of mystery valley, I like your story, which is great interest and attract me into the secret of nature. I agree to you with the sentence “fishing air feels and smells like no other airâ€?, because the air fishing is wonderful, it creates for people as everything feel comfortable and happy. Moreover, this story makes me think back of my memory when I was child. I remember that there is once time, my father told me go to fishing with him, where is near our house. I really hate this sport because it’s bored and require a lot of patient, so I only like to stay home watch TV or listening music, but my father want me to fishing with him. Next, I agree go to fishing with him, and this is my first experience in fishing. He taught me how to fishing, which is simple in that one only has to live bait up a hook and throw the line in the water. And when I caught the first fish, I feel very happy and wonderful as a dream of catching monster fish, it’s easy to get started fishing. As a result, I like this sport, the fun is in catching, not in sitting silently for hours trying to break a record, keep it fun and playful. Also, I understand that where I can learn new things in nature and get ready to head out on the water with funs, this is a great way to learn new skills, have some funs, and connect with family. Nowadays, I am not living with my family, but I always remember about whatever I have a good memory with my family. I think that everybody and your son (Jason) will have a day wonder with the family in nature, where won’t forget
I agree. This is a really descriptive and interesting perspective on the valley. Seems like a very beautiful place to go! I think that, as you mentioned in your book: Last Child in the Woods, families should follow your example and spend more time in the outdoors. People should learn to embrace the beauty of the outdoors instead of always staying inside by the electrical outlets. People should take a more active role in developing a deep connection with nature and adopting a healthier lifestyle.
Prose, poetry, and other from of literature are a powerful means of communicating with the inner child, mystifier, romantic, and environmentalist. This story enchants the inner romantic. I like to think that Thoreau seduced his readers with Walden. Perhaps more fiction about children wandering through imagination and nature will prompt readers to find their own love affair with nature. I suppose that’s what Where the Wild Things did, but children shouldn’t have only one story to rely on for inspiration. I’m certain there are more stories out there, but I’m determined to create even more stories to re-invent the inspiration for the inner nature romantic.
Prose, poetry, and other from of literature are a powerful means of communicating with the inner child, mystifier, romantic, and environmentalist. This story enchants the inner romantic. I like to think that Thoreau seduced his readers with Walden. Perhaps more fiction about children wandering through imagination and nature will prompt readers to find their own love affair with nature. I suppose that’s what Where the Wild Things did, but children shouldn’t have only one story to rely on for inspiration. I’m certain there are more stories out there, but I’m determined to create even more stories to re-invent the inspiration for the inner nature romantic.
This story reminds me of Thoreau’s Walden. If edited properly as a short story fiction, it could be published as a children’s book. The descriptive writing is wonderful, and it brings the reader into the moment, sharing the muck, fright, and wonder through words. The adventure itself reminds me of the Jungle Book ride at Disneyland. As I read your son discover the alligator in the story, I was taken back to the robot alligators emerging from the swamp surface; as a kid I thought they were real. They weren’t real, but the excitement was there. This memory trigger can serve as a wonder imagination trigger in other children, inspiring them to go on safaris in the overgrown lawn in the backyard or play swamp thing in the pool.